Rewrite the following in more coordinated (and where necessary, grammatically correct) English:
1. He is neither a member of Parliament nor of a political party.
ad.1 He is a member
NEITHER of Parliament nor a political party.
2. The author's intention was not only to attack social hypocrisies but also an appeal for greater humanity.
ad.2 The author's intention was not only to attack social hypocrisies but also
TO appeal for greater humanity.
3. This kind of understanding requires a great deal of effort - both from the teenagers and older sections of the community.
ad.3 This kind of understanding requires a great deal of effort -
FROM both the teenagers and older sections of the community.
4. Languages are desperate not only in regard to grammar and vocabulary but also they differ phonetically.
ad.4 Languages are desperate in regard
NOT ONLY to grammar and vocabulary but also they differ phonetically.
5. Industrialization does more harm than good to forests, animals, and indirectly to ourselves.
ad. 5. Industrialization does more harm than good forests
TO animals, and indirectly to ourselves.
Proszę o sprawdzenie.